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corbjop · **Posted:** Fri Mar 05, 2010 3:47 am

N-N-N-NEW STORY! I have been wanting to write a new fan fiction for awhile and finally came up with an idea. new parts soon

without further ado...

Mr.Hill stepped out of his car and onto his driveway. he looked down the street he had just come down, scanning it quickly. down the road he saw a couple walking beside each other and farther than that on the opposite side there was a man walking his dog. Mr.Hill could only vaguely see his outline in the light cast by the street lights, but he knew he was one of them. He lived in a small town called Highfield, in which nothing ever happened. recently he had started to see these men around town in black coats and dark hats that covered their faces. They would normally just act like normal people never giving Mr.Hill even a notice. He would have thought they were just normal citizens too if it weren’t for one night when he was walking home and saw a group of them making their way down the street. after walking for awhile they all piled into a small store. Mr.Hill walked to the store and peeked in the window, being cautious not to be seen. Inside the men approached the man at the counter. One of them was talking to him just loud enough that Mr.Hill could barely catch glimpses of a few words. after talking for about 2 minutes two other men jumped forward at him with a dark sac and threw him inside. Mr.Hill suddenly thought that he shouldn’t be there. he bolted down the street in the direction of his house. once he had made a good distance he turned around and saw them staring at him. Since then Mr.Hill was very paranoid. he was never the kind of person who was calm in the first place, always fretting about the little things that didn’t matter. This night he had gone to the grocery store late at night like he always did because he thought it was safer to go when less people were going. he grabbed his groceries and ran inside. he locked the door and made his way to his kitchen. He set the groceries down and sat in his favorite chair. he sat there watching TV until he fell asleep.

The next day he went to his therapist. he told him about the men in the dark coats.
“I think you should see this man about that” he said, and handed him a business card.
“okay, thanks” said Mr.Hill.

he drove to the address on the card until he came to an old looking building downtown. He approached the front door and opened it. it creaked open and he stepped inside. The place was dimly lit by a few lights hanging from the ceiling. the floor was a polished marble that looked cracked in many places and could use a mopping. he crossed the room to a desk near an elevator. on the counter in front of the desk there was a sign that read:
“Out to lunch”
He looked up at the dull silver clock on the wall. It read 10:00. on the desk he saw a piece of paper that had a list of names and floors. he found the name from the card and went into the elevator.
“floor 7” he said as he pushed the button on the elevator panel. deep within a room on the 7th floor a man pushed another button with his long pale fingers and the screen in front of him switched views to one inside the elevator. he watched as Mr.Hill paced back and forth in the elevator.
“Perfect” he muttered to himself in a nasally voice.

corbjop · **Posted:** Fri Mar 05, 2010 2:29 pm

New part. I'm going to spend all time I can get to write on this so I can get alot! The name will make sense eventually.

Mr.Hill stepped out of the elevator and looked down the hall.
there was about 3 door on each side of the hallway and at the end there was a large dusty window looking out onto the busy street of downtown highfield. he looked at the signs on the door.
he found the right one and turned the shiny metal handle.
he stepped inside and heard a mechanical noisr when suddenly.the ground beneath him fell out and he was in freefall. he screamed as he flew downwad.
he was falling for many minutes before he landed face fist on a big pillow. he laid motionless for a moment and then got up and looked at his surrondings.
it was dark. very dark. far away he saw a light approaching and heard footsteps.

popfan97 · **Posted:** Sun Mar 07, 2010 1:59 am

Oh wow!

This is suspenseful! Just like the books! I really can't wait for more!

Mάðάmع✗o'ℓάηtعrη · **Posted:** Sun Mar 07, 2010 8:31 pm

corbjop wrote:

it was dark. very dark. far away he saw a light approaching and heard footsteps.

uh, oh O__O

Mάðάmع✗o'ℓάηtعrη · **Posted:** Sun Mar 07, 2010 8:32 pm

corbjop wrote:

it was dark. very dark. far away he saw a light approaching and heard footsteps.

uh, oh O__O

rebelscum · **Posted:** Sat May 08, 2010 5:11 pm

corbjop wrote:

He landed face fist on a big pillow.

That doest sound all that bad... unless its a trap! :twisted:

corbjop · **Posted:** Wed May 19, 2010 2:55 am

Been awhile since I've been here. Should I continue? (also the big pillow is like HUGE to cushion his fall.)

JerTheAraluan · **Posted:** Wed May 19, 2010 3:13 am

Indeed, continue please!
I am hoping Mr. Hill eventually winds up meeting Will and the rest of the gang! That would be epic.

corbjop · **Posted:** Mon May 24, 2010 6:32 pm

Well... I usually don't like to make my fan fictions meet up with characters in the real books but I could make an exception.

I'll work on a new part now!

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